For those of you who have been following the recent odyssey of Moonbeam Highway and its editorial review at Harper Collins, I am amazed at how many of you have at least glanced at my blog, and I want to thank you for your interest.
I have followed the editor's suggestion by making some allusion to Eddie's bitterness, while strengthening the hints at his denial. The first five Chapters are posted and demonstrate the use of the first, second, and third person narrative styles he also alluded to.
I'd be interested in knowing if it works for people, and would welcome comments either way.
More changes are on the way including a new chapter, of on the road time, in which the love interest draws Eddie out regarding his feelings about having lost his fortune and his opulent lifestyle.
The link is here. Moonbeam Highway
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