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Dialogue: Who’s Talking Now?

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I’m going to be leading a workshop—I hesitate to say “teaching” since I’d like it to include input from the participants—on dialogue basics for Savvy Authors. It starts on May 30th and will run through June 27th. There’s a sign up link in the sidebar.

Here's a secret – handling dialogue almost stopped me from becoming a writer. But wait, you're saying. Didn't you just say dialogue came easy?

Hearing dialogue was easy. Thinking dialogue was easy. But when I sat down to try to write a story that had been rolling around in my head, I found that typing dialogue was a royal pain. There were rules. Where did the punctuation go? I got so bogged down in remembering that you needed a comma and quote marks before the tag (not that I knew it was called a tag then), that I couldn't write the story. All that "shift" key stuff made writing a chore. The stories could stay in my head, where there wasn't anything complicated to remember.

But I still had voices and stories in my head. Later—much later—I gave it another shot. This time, I plugged away until the mechanics became second nature. And I didn't worry so much about getting all those pesky punctuation bits in the right place until I went back to edit.

As a beginner, all my characters sounded the same, and far too much like me. I had to learn to 'translate' what they were saying into what would work on the page. You see, dialogue isn't "real" speech, but it has to sound like real speech.

Why is dialogue important? Half you manuscript might be dialogue. Dialogue will bring your characters to life, and without believable characters, you're going to lose readers. And, if you're submitting to agents or editors, they're going to look at dialogue. They may not even read your "story", but rather flip to a dialogue-filled page in your submission and see if you've handled it well.

What are they looking for?
They'll want to see how you handle speaker attributes (tags). Do you have passages of spitfire dialogue? Informative dialogue? Interrupted dialogue? Journalistic dialogue? Is it commonplace? Melodramatic?

As I work on my “lectures” for the workshop, I would rather address topics that are of interest to the group. Even if you’re not going to participate, what are some of the lessons you’ve learned about dialogue? What sorts of things do you think writers ought to know? All suggestions welcome!