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Fire and Wine

 

 

A poem for the Feast of Pentecost

 

And then it happened...

We hung around for safety

above ground level

the clamouring souls outside

a packed embolus

 

fain clutching our feet

as if they craved live contact

with celebrity

and sought a fragment of him

we could not furnish

 

that desert instant

the Word became illumined

sparks ran among the

stubble of our deadlocked heart

bursting occlusion

 

We recalled the phrase

God is a consuming fire

We had thought it meant

wrath; titanic sacrifice

on our part, not his

 

Holocausts were done!

The quality of mercy

much spoken of was

now eternally unstrained

its current flowing

 

This was the God of

Shadrach and his noble breed

passing through furnace

defying wild destruction

unseared and annealed

 

It was the God of

Moses and the burning bush

bridling lakes of fire

of brimstone and Gehenna

passionate in peace

 

Divine transfusion

filling us with sentience!

We rose up as one

the livid fear doused and gone

We had to tell it!

 

So high on rapture

we gave the false impression

the wine of Bacchus

irrigated our parched veins

Mistaken vintage!

 

 

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Pentecost is my favorite church feast

Hello Rosy,

I love your poems. I don't always know how to respond to them, but this one talks to me especially your "mistaken vintage" line.

I have a postcard from Napa Valley (I always try to cite my sources - :) ) that reads:

Water divides people, wine unites them.

Water is what unites people not wine. I like wine, but people treat it like a material good to incite envy now and it is what divides people.

Always wanted the gift of tongues, I love learning how to read languages, but don't have too many opportunities to speak them except French.

Ruth :)

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That's lovely to hear, Ruth,

That's lovely to hear, Ruth, on both counts. I'm touched by your kind comments.

Sadly, Pentecost is the most misapprehended Feast and, in the UK, Whitsuntide hasn't been a bank holiday for several decades. Instead, we now have a secular Spring Bank Holiday observed on the last weekend of May.

I think the first recorded miracle of Jesus, the turning of water into wine at the wedding in Cana has deep, deep connotations that were realised at Pentecost.

Like you, I love the Romance languages. In Europe, we have no excuse for not gaining a degree of facility with them.

I do wish you luck with your new travelogue. You're doing exactly what we were advised at a Society of Authors seminar last week - putting content out there - all of it! The publishing revolution train hasn't reached a platform yet...but it's on the way and nothing can stop it.

Rosy:)

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You're welcome Rosy. Your poetry is so beautiful. Keep writing, Ruth