Hi again! I just wanted to put this out there for those who are interested. I've finally put my new story online, but it still is unfinished and I will definetely be adding more and more to it. It's not completely done yet. So, to those who would like to read and review, or comment on it, I'll attach the link. And please, no recopying it at all. It is my work, and I only put it up to get a few opinions on it.
Thanks to all who read and review it. :)