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Today was a good day. Work was productive. It felt as though people that I passed on the streets were in a good mood, and the office was in good cheer.

When I looked out the window this morning while I was getting ready to start the day, the clouds were a nice tone of deep gray. The cool air was a refreshing welcome to the past few hot days. Fifteen minutes later, the gray was breaking and white clouds were mingling with blue skies. Outside, walking to my car, I felt a lift in my step.

I have until tomorrow to put the finishing touches on my short story. I was glad that its rough beginnings were well received. A part of me though feels that I may have trapped my characters in their world. I feel on one hand glad that a few classmates were intrigued by the story; on the other hand, I don’t want to disappoint, but I may have to completely reshape the story because as it stands there are too many loose ends that don’t work together. It might turn out to be a very different story, possibly less interesting than my first free write.

Interestingly, the tarot card that I drew this morning turned out to provide inspiration for my story. I felt it this morning and was able to think it out in my mind on my way to work. I’ll have to see if I’m able to bring the insights to the story’s page.

Mostly, I’m happy it was a good day.

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Excellent!

I have a lift to my step after reading your post. Have fun with your story.

Cheers

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I'm happy you felt a lift to

I'm happy you felt a lift to your step too. : )

Thank you!

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Rebbecca, Sounds like your

Rebbecca,

Sounds like your story is going well. Hope the rest of the day was as wonderful and inspiring as the start.

Annette

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Thanks, Annette. Have a good

Thanks, Annette. Have a good week.

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Sticking points

There's a point at which going beyond in writing, editing, etc., makes the story more sterile. Getting to know that point is one of the skills of writing. 

I know the story will turn out well though. Go for it!

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I've definitely had that

I've definitely had that happen in certain pieces I've written--where it becomes sterile. It's a challenge to know when to stop. As you say, it's one of the skills of writing.

Thanks for the vote of confidence!