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"But it really happened."

I was in an adult-ed writer's group when I first heard this. I watched the woman become tenser and grimmer as the class-gently and with compassion-suggested that the gruesome events on the page could be presented in a manner more conducive to engaging the reader.

She listened for only a few moments-sadly, this group did not have the listen to critique in silence policy-before unleashing, accusing the group of everything from indifference to sexual assault on children, to not understanding how children really thought (this in response to our collective idea that 4-year-olds did not speak like 30-year-olds.) She shook as she lectured us on the horror of incest.

True that. Everything she said about her pain and suffering was true-but it still didn't work on the page. My social services hat went on and I reacted to her effort at self-therapy on paper, attempting to bandage her up. Writing this way isn't always a bad thing, but it's not always good either-for the writer or the reader.

Writer X didn't have the dramatic distance needed to make her story intofiction. Her devotion to her memories (as she remembered them) transformed her work into something uncomfortable to read, not because of the subject matter (as she'd accused us) but because somehow her "facts" made for poor fiction.

Looking back on my first attempts at a novel (where I mashed-up fact and fiction) I searched for the reason my early work was a disaster. Reading through spread fingers in front of my face, I found that I'd worked too hard to make the me-disguised-as-a-character seem heroic, victimized, wry, adorable, etc, and the antagonists (usually ex-partners) appear as a worse or better version of who they really were. All this was done in service of revving up history with a goal of making life unfold and then climax in the manner I'd always wanted. Unfortunately, those goals, while neither inherently bad nor good for my mental health, didn't meet the mission of making a quality experience for the reader.

Now I believe in only using the emotional truths and themes; ‘it really happened' events are only used as stepping-stones to the drama of "what if." For instance, in my novel of a father killing his wife in front of his daughters, a barely-recalled event from my childhood when my father attacked my mother was blown up to a far huger than life story.

Using only emotional truth (feeling abandoned, being father-less, the push-pull of sisterhood, etc) in building a fictional world (orphanages, fathers in prison, foster families, medical school . . .) allowed me the freedom to present my point of view and side characters without feeling boxed in or constrained (as using autobiographical characters will engender for me.) It also let me explore the theme of family loyalty in a far more dramatic and open fashion than using my own life would allow.

My current work-in-progress has the theme that infidelity will ripple through many families. I again use emotional facts while avoiding real history. Invention frees me, while following real life freezes my fiction into a boring rigidity of event telling and avoidance (hey, my family's gonna read it!)

Even when using emotional truth, I will pick and choose what to delve into. I find that only the passion of something far enough away from my current circumstances allow me story-telling breathing room. For instance, I couldn't write about the new-love-sex-is-amazing and life-is-Technicolor glitter period of early relationships while in the throes of that lust, for fear of sounding like the blathering idiot one does become during this time.

Other bits of life, even emotional life, I can never explore (for fear of rendering truths that are not mine to expose) are those of my children or husband. It was impossible to borrow from my mother or father's lives until they were gone. My sister and I discussed how far I could and would go in my fiction.

I'd don't want to be in a face-off between loyalty to a reader and loyalty to my family, so I stick with the inner and outer world that belongs to me.

It's funny, readers so often wonder if "it really happened." They are sometimes determined to conflate the author and the writer. A friend recently told a story of going to a book club for her novel and being told with great surprise: "You look nothing like your character!"

It is true that many love writing their life into their novels and there is room for all in the big book tent. Each of us finds our own balance, but when I write, the scenes that truly transport me and send me soaring are the furthest things from real life, but not furthest from my imagination.

"What if?" I love it.

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There are always emotional

There are always emotional and psychological truths beyond the actual events of anyone's life, and knowing where to fit the frame and how to convey that as fictional grist, presents the real challenge to the author's skill.

I remember reading many years ago a book by Michael Legat, well-known in the UK for his tips on authorship. In it, he said he belonged to dramatic society and one of the plays called for a mother and daughter. There were two such members, but it was decided not to cast them in the respective roles as they bore so little resemblance to each other as not to be credible.

I'd wholeheartedly endorse what you say about 'truths that are not mine to expose'. The real story can so often never be told. Even with celebrities telling it like it is in their autobiographies, I suspect there's more fiction in those than you or I will ever write!

Thoughtful post. Thanks, Randy.

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Rosy--thanks for your good

Rosy--thanks for your good words--now I want to find a book by Michael Legat. A great tip.