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Number 4: Slavery of Amour
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You'd been my wonderful leader...

You'd made sure I followed your path.
Now you are too cruel to be...
For you've never noticed the whisper of my heart.
It kept telling you over and over...
To let me go.
But you had never listened to it...
You had never done so.

You'd been my great teacher...
You'd taught me what to believe and say.
Now you are too cruel to be...
Because you just force me to obey.
My thoughts, my ideas and my feeling...
Have been forever ignored.
You made me know that...
Without you, I'm just an incomplete jigsaw.

You'd been my generous angel...
You'd spread your wings and made me safe.
Now you are too cruel to be...
For you'd destroyed my ship with your wave.
You've never let me make a difference...
Or have my own way.
You want to see my hurt as you had...
And see me fail as you did yesterday.

For several years...
I've been you prisoner.
I was discarded in your apathy...
Wishing it'd soon be over.
I must not leave you...
But I wasn't anything.
Your demands with nothing in return...
I was still following.

For many years...
You'd built the wall up to ground me.
You'd confined me with those pretences...
Thinking I didn't see.
I was ruined from the inside...
A little bit everyday.
All my agony was kept secretly...
I will not say.

Those days, you'd sentenced me...
In the darkest despair.
Now you open the door and say...
"You can go everywhere!
I can't stand being with you...
And I beg you to make me free"
I laughed and answered...
"I won't let you go, even you now let me!"

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Yok, Hahaha! I love the

Yok,

Hahaha! I love the ending! I believe in equal opportunity in true sense of the word. You're clever. It has everything, love, tragedy, revenge, and humor! You have right attitude. Keep writing. Thank you.

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forgot

I forgot to mention "mystery" beside love, tragedy, revenge, and humor. It was a big mystery, in fact.

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lol

Thank you Keiko. Actually, it was based on only revenge with one of my Univerity friend. He broke our friendship with  no reason. It's funny that we are now still a very close friend and he promises he will never break our friendship ever again, no matter what.