Dear little whistling boy you don't know me but how sweet the sound that you produce is to my ears, my senses, as I sit in this bank totting up figures on a page. If I closed my eyes you could be the tiny robin perched on the tree beyond my kitchen window, so lyrical is the music you make with your lips. To be here in this bank so unburdened with worry, happy in one of those grey functional bank chairs with the shiny steel legs. The chair is your branch little whistling boy. Your foot taps rhythmically against the school bag on the floor. The bag full of books that promise to help you along the path to adulthood, the books that will lure you into life. Will you forget how to whistle when you have reached your quota? Will your music diminish with the weight of your existence in this world? The queue that I rise from my chair to join is a steely snake that makes me wonder if you will answer yes to my questions. No one whistles in this line. People are consumed with their own thoughts and the time and how long they have to wait. A man ahead of me keeps the hood of his jacket up and has a sinister air about him. He fidgets on his feet as if unaccustomed to staying still. Impatient he forms his hands into tight fists, relaxes and repeats the process. His behaviour unsettles me. Overhead on the TV screen is a woman who beams broadly, happy to be granted a loan, she is suddenly shown participating in a Salsa Class. Money can buy you happiness according to the Bank. Look at that woman's face! But now, money means nothing to you, does it little whistling boy? It is mere paper. But someday, someday you will see that it matters. But promise me something little whistling boy. Please don't stop whistling. Don't stop tapping your foot. Keep the tune in your head and always, always leave your hands spread wide open.
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Mary, your blog today...
reminds me of how I love walking to work in the mornings and hearing several gentlemen sing everyday "Down by the Riverside." I always try to put some change in their box.
Jennifer Gibbons, Red Room
I know Jennifer. There is so
I know Jennifer. There is so much happiness wrapped up in a simple whistle! M
Whistling boy
I like this ... it's gracefully written, and sums up the contagious power of one person's joy. For some reason, it made me think of Johnn Cash's classic song "Get Rhythm" abotu the little shoeshine boy and his effect on others.
Whistle
Thank you John, I appreciate your comment.
Bravura! Mary P, you've in fact indited a poem today.
Submit this one for sure to the Irish radio audience. It will strongly appeal to them. I wouldn't change one world of the text for the radio, though you might increase its Irish appeal if you simply add to its title: Little Whistling boy of Erin Mary P, but to give it a timeless quality, you might edit out all the all the references re: today.
Dear little whistling boy you don't know me but how sweet your sound is to my ears, my senses, as I sit in this earthen bank totting up figures on a page. If I closed my eyes you might be the tiny robin perched on the tree beyond my kitchen window, so lyrical is the music you make with your breath and lips. To be here on this bank, so unburdened with worry, you happily let this earthen chair be your branch, little whistling boy. Your foot taps rhythmically against the school bag on the floor. The bag full of books that promise to help you along the path to adulthood, the books that will lure you into life. Will you forget how to whistle when you have reached your success? Money means nothing to you, does it? It is mere paper. But someday, someday you will see that it matters. But promise me something. Please don't stop whistling. Don't stop tapping your foot. Keep the tune in your head and always, always leave your hands spread wide open, little whistling boy.
Thanks Dennis for your
Thanks Dennis for your input! I agree it would be a suitable piece for the radio. I will certainly submit it. Mp
Truly beautiful
What a beautiful display of words you have created here, Mary!
Shana
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Thank you for your kind
Thank you for your kind comment Shana! It is funny because I was in my kitchen thinking I had nothing to blog about today because it seemed to be just another regular old Monday when suddenly out of the blue the little whistling boy, that I met in the bank came into my mind and I thought that's it! All the best, M
You just know a child is
You just know a child is content when s/he's whistling or skipping.
Yes Ellen, if only we could
Yes Ellen, if only we could remain that open and be resistant to the conditioning that comes along. As I sat in my car in traffic today I also observed many children looking unhappy, hands under chins, scowling being driven along in swish silver cars by frazzled Moms and nobody talking never mind whistling!
Interesting observation,
Interesting observation, Mary.
Coincidentally, about a week or 10 days ago, I was gabbing on the phone with a female M.D. friend of mine. We both admitted we miss being able to skip and sometimes sneak it in when we are walking home alone from somewhere at night. It feels good, it deters any would-be attackers, and one arrives home at warp speed.
Whistling and skipping. . .the world needs more of both.