"A foreclosed home may be in need of major repairs."
... changed to ...
"A foreclosed home may need major repairs."
This isn't a show-stopper by any means. It's certainly not like the "lump crap cocktail" I came across a while back.
But it's one of those little triumphs over wordiness and stiff language that give us copy editors a thrill. Aaah.
Causes June Casagrande Supports
Planned Parenthood, ClimateCrisis.net, the Richard Dawkins Foundation, Pet Orphans of Southern California, KIVA