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She held my hand firmly

No expressions but remained calmly

She was deep in thought and looked sadly

She wanted to say something but feared badly

 

Generally speaking, it is always one sided affair

Ladies suffer more and this one is totally unfair

Pain and agony kill them from inside

They have no means to retain or easily confide

 

I had spent very memorable moments

I flowed with her but remained silent

She wore deserted look and looked barren

I was experiencing hell in heaven

 

I tried to read her face between lines

She was unable to keep herself on sideline

She was about to weep with almost broken stage

I tried to console her as understood and correctly guessed

 

It was not all about my desertion

That was never feared and remained out of question

I am of opinion that relation must remain open and frank

But her cal composure made me to think and I slowly sank

 

She had never thought of illogical bond

Even though she remained firm and fond

I was from different cast and little inferior

More in age and looked more of senior

 

She feared backlash and reprisal

The dark clouds indicated their arrival

She sensed of some unforeseen consequences

Even though she was of strong mind with presence

 

Tears rolled out endlessly in mere silence

 I allowed her to deplete sorrows at once

“We ere meant for each other and remain so”

I assured her with firm resolve to forget and forgo 

 

Sometimes sentiments drive us to the extreme corner

Any good or bad things come in life later or sooner

But some lucky people get them as they wanted

And some suffer as they were meant to be suffocated

 

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Code Sheddy highly creative and nicely analysed,love it

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Kristina Monroe thank you for uderstanding the ways and woes of a woman. i hope you get what you want. i do not beieve you were meant to suffer suffocating in a corner

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 Kristina Monroe wow! excellent. "No expressions but remained calmly

She was deep in thought and looked sadly

She wanted to say something but feared badly

 

Generally speaking, it is always one sided affair

Ladies suffer more and this one is totally unfair

Pain and agony kill them from inside

They have no means to retain or easily confide"

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Ken George Newman beatiful write.

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Osamede Osunde...very emotional, an amazing journey!

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Ken George Newman beatiful write.

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 Kristina Monroe wow! excellent. "No expressions but remained calmly

She was deep in thought and looked sadly

She wanted to say something but feared badly

 

Generally speaking, it is always one sided affair

Ladies suffer more and this one is totally unfair

Pain and agony kill them from inside

They have no means to retain or easily confide"

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Kristina Monroe thank you for uderstanding the ways and woes of a woman. i hope you get what you want. i do not beieve you were meant to suffer suffocating in a corner

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Code Sheddy highly creative and nicely analysed,love it

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mrs parikh super very very super Delete 
"INY" -" BAD .. nice one----super like Delete 
P()()j@ speak is not always work silence is most imp............ Delete 
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sky high why do you think when a woman is in pain, she keep silent i have that attitude too esp to my love ones!!! so im not alone!! thanks hasmukh!!

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Katherine Wyatt Trinity Poetry the many colors that make our emotional world some seem to move easier .. perhaps ir t=is the lawful unfolding of our previous actions.. a wonderful piece my fiend..45 minutes ago · Like

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Dear Mehtaji, you have expressed your deep feelings very effectively. Remedy lies in the Upanishads for this kind of agony - "Husband loves the wife not because of his love for her, it is because he loves himself. Wife loves the husband not because of her love for him, it is because she loves herself." A saying of Bhajagovindam is not out of place here - Bhaarya bibhyati tasmin kaaye,' (Even the wife finds his corpse nauseating.) It is only in mythological stories that we find Savithris

K.H. Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka
Nov 09, 2011