After a certain pause, I am ready to present my third piece of poetry. Because it is short poetry, to enrich its perceiving and for better understanding, here I submit few introduction words:
The poem has been written for a flash poetry contest with an obligatory rule to consist of five lines but the power of the poem is elsewhere - in its metaphors and the complex outlay of the scenes.
It sees the nature of life through the parallels of sun - moon cycle and love.
Simply explained, it embodies two pictures acting in complete parallel with one another and visualizing, throughout their symbolic illustrations, the poem's main idea - "Eternal cycle" - the nature of being. Both are taken from the same source - life itself - the first one being the "sun - moon" or the "day - night" cycle and the second - the carussel of love.
There is also an unique moment with the metaphoric expressions of the sun based on my native (Bulgarian) mythological traditions.
In short the poem tells the story of two lovers who have been together. The first one gives love while the second estranges. And leaves away to be free from the other. After the parting, the tragedy follows. After the tragedy, nothing is left...
For those interested in reading, this is the direct link to my poem, and you can follow it through my member's page as well.
Your comments, opinion and feedback are mostly welcomed as ever. Be frank and you are appreciated. Thank you.