where the writers are
Wayfarers

In cracked soles

dusty finger nails

frosted eyes

musty armpits

the soggy velvet of skin

wayfarers meet

 

plunging darkness

into night

groping feathers

that fly

into a cage

wayfarers meet

 

watering thirsty

river beds

nothing is said

silence drowns

swallowed by a whale

wayfarers meet

 

inside the body

and feed

hunger

their flesh inseparable

at last

wayfarers meet

 

~FV

 

(c) Farzana Versey

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Painting: 'L'Etreinte by Picasso

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Is it Picasso's painting that

Is it Picasso's painting that inspired your beautiful, sensual poem?

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Picasso

Picasso did come in while I was jotting down the poem, Katherine.  The painting was for something else, but then it fit in and I did find my words partially meshing with it. I went to my first line and started looking for the unseen soles in the painting to see if they were cracked.  The bed seems comfortable, so it was natural to assume they weren't. But then, in the "plunging darkness" who was to know what one finds where!

Thank you...

~F

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I think I should blush or

I think I should blush or something.

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Tell me, Eric. Did you? Does

Tell me, Eric. Did you? Does Picasso always have that effect?

~F

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Shucks I get that affect from

Shucks I get that affect from landscapes. :)

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Everything is a landscape. ~F

Everything is a landscape.

~F

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Farzana,Your poem

Farzana,

Your poem and the painting exemplify in form and content (images) what is "aesthetic" better than any academic or philosophical definition.  "A poem should not mean but be...for all  the history of grief/ an empty doorway and a maple leaf" [MacLeish].

B

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Brenden: The aesthetic is

Brenden:

The aesthetic is when content does not have to battle with form and form does not supercede content. They flow seamlessly. I try not to try, leaving some jagged edges sometimes. 

The quote is just that. To be. All else is an extension, if not an intrusion.

Your words are always so encouraging. Thank you.

~F

PS: I will reply to your thoughtful comment on the other post in a day or so as I will be signing out in a bit.

 

 

 

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Pretty poetry

Brenden:

Thought about our discussion on the aesthetic and our slightly differing views on that post. Reminded me of one of my early poems here.

Pretty poetry

It is not pretty, but...

~F