There was a time
when waves would gather
mouths foaming
in epileptic fits
as storms blasted through the windows
of my desert home
the sandcastle’s moat hanging limply
like a rag
falling as thick sodden dust
trails of helpless fingerprints on them
There was a time
when I could wait forever
as roads snaked ahead
and stoic roofs had holes bored into them
for me to see the sky
as high as nowhere
and then there were rains
the floor drenched with watered dirt
borrowed from air
traces of clouds stuck to their memories
There was a time
when elastic days wrapped around my waist
snugly coutured I’d walk into the sunlight
dappled with rays
the golden gaze of summer afternoons
waltzing on toe tips
smiling strawberry lips
would bite into the raw flesh of time
as darkness descended and loosened the grip
specks of light remained on the skin of night
There was a time
~FV
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Funny how something
Funny how something dominated by the past tense seems so essential and charging at tomorrow. Very nice.
Thank you. The past seems to
Thank you. The past seems to be in a hurry!
~F
Simply elegant memoir
Farzana,
Beautiful, a simply elegant memoir - the foaming mouths of waves, elastic days, golden gaze of summer, traces of clouds stuck to their memories, bite into the raw flesh of time - I felt compelled to trace your words, to borrow them for a moment.
Thank you, Lynn
Thank you, Lynn
I like it that you think of this as 'elegant'. I tend to usually be a bit 'raw', especially when writing what could be memoir-type poetry.
~F
...for me to see the sky as
...for me to see the sky
as high as nowhere...
f - I will carry this sentence with me and recall it often, swirl it around in my mouth until it seeps down through my bones and carries me through the days to come. mx
Lovely, M, and thank
Lovely, M, and thank you...isn't it wonderful that we can share a sky?
~F