She pulled back the curtains and glanced into the backyard. He was out there again. All she could see was his dirty jeans and one arm, the rest of Artie was tucked up under the hood of what had once been a lime-green AMC Gremlin. He’d picked it up ten years back for a hundred bucks from a hungry college kid who could no longer afford the duct tape and prayer it took to keep the thing rolling. Ten years.
Ginny rolled her eyes and let the curtain drop back into place, returning to the small pile of dishes she was washing. She wondered if he’d ever wake up.
Artie was a dreamer. When they were younger, she’d loved that about him. He could sit at a table and tell you about how the world was going to change. He’d talk about Science Fiction writers as if they were prophets, and scientists as if they were gods. His life hadn’t gone exactly as planned, but to his credit, that never slowed him down. Artie never got a degree…he dropped out and became a mechanic when Ginny got pregnant. He never complained…and he never quit dreaming.
He had t-shirts lining a drawer in his dresser. They ran the gamut of scientific geekery - but the one he’d had the longest, and the one that she regretted ever buying for him, hung on the wall over their couch. It was his mantra. It was her particular corner of lower heck. She couldn’t say hell. He was a good man, a good mechanic, and he paid the bills. He was gentle, and took care of her…but that damned GREMLIN — he was obssessed with it…sometimes she thought it was more important to him than she was.
The door opened, and Artie stepped inside grinning.
“What?” Ginny asked.
“It’s done,” he said.
Artie had said this before. For the second time in less than five minutes, Ginny rolled her eyes and turned back to her dishes. Artie watched her for a moment, then he ran into the living room, as he’d done a hundred times before, grabbed the t-shirt from the wall over the couch, and traded the old “Beam Me Up, Scotty,” shirt he’d been wearing for the only one that mattered. Then he rushed back out into the back yard, the door slamming behind him, and Ginny sighed.
A moment later, she heard the engine on the Gremline fire. SHe’d heard that sound so many times she thought she could make out separate pistons. It was a very smooth, purring sound. He was a very good mechanic. Maybe he should put the thing on eBay - it was probably an antique.
She waited for him to come slamming back in, pouting, and scratching his head. She waited for him to groan and grumble and return to his tools. The engine kept running. She fought the urge, then lost the fight. She pulled the curtains back again and glanced out.
Facing her, hovering at window level, Artie grinned through the windshield of the Gremlin, waving madly. She dropped the plate she’d been drying and it shattered. She tried to meet his gaze, but she couldn’t. Her eyes were locked on that t-shirt. That amazing freaking wonderful t-shirt.
It read. “Where the hell is my flying car?”
Artie turned, arced up over the back fence, and headed for the open sky.
-DNW
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Yes! I hope it happens
Yes! I hope it happens exactly like that. I have to believe the scenario you so richly describe is going on in garages around the world right now.
And now I want an "I Want My Flying Car!" shirt. Love the picture, too!
Chris R.
www.EightDaysToAmish.com
Hah!
See, your blog post made me post the story, because it just fit so well. While we aren't flying yet, one of the engineers in our company here built a hovercar in his garage - and it works! So I guess we aren't too far off.
David
Awwww.
Thanks for that. Never give up!
Huntington Sharp, Red Room
Give up? Not me!
I have neither flying car nor bestseller yet (though my Star Trek novel was a USA bestseller for a day or two)...but the time is drawing nigh, I believe.
Thanks for welcoming me to your site.
David
Exactly
On my good days, I like to think I'm that guy, and all the time I like to think everyone can be that guy. You are definitely that guy. I love this story!
Ivory Madison
Founder and CEO, redroom.com
Thanks!
You guys have really made me start to feel at home here. Looking forward to dropping more stories into the mix. I write books for money and longer stories for money - but sometimes a story like that one just needs to reach readers. I want to have the t-shirt made.
David
t-shirt
Count me in on a pre-order!
Thanks for that!
This is my first comment on anything I have ever read here or any website ... ever! I don't have the ability to describe how much I enjoyed that story, but it did hit me on a lot of levels, so much so that I forwarded your story to everyone I know. Thank you for sharing it!
Tony Gim, Red Room
Hey Tony!
Thanks...I appreciate that...this story is very very short, but it's one that made me feel good to write, and better to share. Please, send people here....lots of people. There are always more stories.
David
Did you mean that?
When you write "Artie never got a degree",did you mean that he is like Hemingway,Steinbeck or Thomas Edison ?They too had no degree at all,which didn't prevent them to become what they had
Best
Hammoudi.
Well...yeah
That was part of the point...he learned it all on his own because it was what mattered to him.
David
good story
Every time I read this story, it brings a smile on my safe. What a great little way to show persistence and hard work.
You know, this reminds me of an old joke (can't remember from where)
"Behind every successful man stands a very surprised woman"
Randy Wong
When I was young girl, i
When I was young girl, i used to ask for my mom why we have to go to the airport? But my mom didnt say anything. Now i read all your story getting me smile, however, i wish we can have flying car in the near future..
http://AWoMeNDesire.Blogspot.Com
Thank you
Thank you for the inspiration. I was starting to feel like the word dreamer was a dirty word but then I read your story and I could see the Gremlin flying up to the window. Yeah. Love it.
Inspiration
Just watched a movie with my daughter called "HOP" Great story about the Easter Bunny that dreams of being a drummer and a regular guy that finds his dream--to be the Easter Bunny.
I thought while watching it; parents need to stop squashing their kids dreams! Even if they seem outlandish.
Great piece!
Just re-read your story.
Like everyone else, I so enjoyed it.
Also enjoyed the comments and especially Randy Wong's.
Do it !
Yep, ten weeks or ten years--just do it!
The striving can be a thrill--whether success will be the end or not.
Yep, just do it!
I absolutely loved it!
I absolutely loved it!
I absolutely loved it!
I absolutely loved it!
Wonderful!
This speaks to me of the power of belief, unadulterated tenacity, and hope. I was captivated and felt myself step into the complexity of this short, yet enchanting piece of prose. I was looking through the window, as well. I really enjoyed this and am pleased that I discovered it.
Up, up and away!
Great ending! We fly away with the character and we hear the clatter of the dropped plate.
Thank you all!
I missed some comments here...while I was away. Thank you all. I love this tory...and try to live it.