First sentence and I remove "roughly" and then, the accursed "then". Getting rid of adverbs outpaces adjectives.
A line of dialogue just made me laugh out loud. No wonder I like these guys. And-yes- Louie-the-dog raised his head.
Laff-out-loud dialogue followed by whole conversations being removed. What the . . .
Main character has a dialogue tick: “Yeah - well.” It doesn't travel well. I'm going to take all of them out.
A detailed description of the NATO complex to create atmosphere. It slows things. There are others. Pages removed.
In the course of 60pp, a pet name for Bess started with one character but is now with another. Confusing.