I haven't tried my hand at poetry in many years--close to a decade I would imagine. I have had many classes on poetry, and I've taught it before, but my education has been focused primarily on fiction.
I don't know what motivated these emotions to emerge as a poem. This is a rough draft, still so raw. It was the first death in years for my family. It was also my first poem in years. My grandmother died in hospice care almost a year ago now. I wrote this not long after:
Vaseline, thick and glistening,
Smears a shine on pallid
Cheeks and lips, too
Frail to kiss.
Blue reigns now,
Veins thinning from a lack
Of hydration and nutrients,
Tinting the lips violet,
Filming eyes, open
Less each hour. We
Feel blue like the celestial sea
She crosses, and we
Wade and wait
to cross.
Death wears blue, not
Black like folklore claims; He
creeps into a room, a burglar
we left a key for. Not a Reaper.
No scythe. This thievery is invited.
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First in years but with many more....
Sarah,
I see metaphors, introspect, reflections, mirrors and much more. If this is the first in years then there's plenty more where this came from..
Warm Regards
Leslie
http://lesliemusoko.blogspot.com
http://lesliemusoko.ning.com
Thanks!
I appreciate the encouraging note, Leslie! :) I also tried to reply to the email you sent me, but Red Room's email system would not oblige. Thank you always for your kind words!
Your words...
Your words are vivid and simple. The first time I read this I teared-up a bit. Thank you for making me feel human emotion, again. Beautiful.
Peace,
Evan