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Her Shoes

A pair of black strappy sandals

placed perfectly~

side by side,

on the red bench outside.

 

What's the story?

Did she walk away from her life,

the way she walked away from her shoes?

© annettealaine-2013

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This reminded me of the

This reminded me of the opening of Anne Tyler's book "Ladder of Years."  No strappy black shoes or red bench, but a desperate woman walking away from her life with no more than a bathing suit and tote bag.  Haunting and tempting at the same time.

 

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Oh Annette this is great! 

Oh Annette this is great!  Looks like she's just having a "moment"... i think if it were a final separation, the shoes would be inside the dumpster and not on a chair sitting and waiting!  :-)

 

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Kelly- I remember that

Kelly- I remember that opening! One of my favorite authors.

I am trying to notice everything around me. I think the combination of a new job and coming out of the fog of trying to survive the last few years, has sharpened my eye for detail.

Thanks for stopping by,

Annette

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Brilliant, Annette!

Brilliant, Annette!

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Katherine and Rina, Aren't

Katherine and Rina,

Aren't they just sitting there so patiently? Wondering if she will return?

What you stumble upon on a innocent trip to Target!

Thanks for stopping by,

Annette