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richard-martin's picture
Aug.27.2010
Don't Tell Readers Stuff you already told them or that they would rather figure out on their own...
Here's the kind of critique a writer would pay dearly for, but it came free from my friend & fellow writer Kerri Sandberg, with respect to a section of a novel I'm working on: Hey Richard.... One thing I did notice in the first half was that I found myself feeling a little impatient with...